User talk:Zaycodes/Sandbox/API:Compare

• End all your sentences with a period.
• Change your example description to "Compare the current revisions of two different pages ".
• When talking about parameters like " fromrevid", "from"...etc, wrap them in code tags.
• The very last sentence doesn't seem incomplete.
• Can we find a way to trim down the text in the additional notes section?
• Under the subtitle "Relative comparison at first and last revision", the information seems to be inconsistent with the response from the api. For instance, in the first request, the notes mention that "The fromrevid property will be absent from the results " but I can see the "fromrevid" in the results. Same with the second request.

@Jeropbrenda, I've fixed this

@Zaycodes The fourth and sixth points that I had raised in the feedback seem not to be addressed.

@Jeropbrenda, the last sentence is complete and I've addressed the 6th point also. the example does not apply to those points

@Zaycodes Okay. I was under the impression that it was not complete because it ends with a semi-colon.

@Jeropbrenda, I've fixed it

@Zaycodes Thank you. Fix the formatting under the subheading "Relative comparison at first and last revision". The semi-colon seems to be used inappropriately and the double bullets make the formatting not look neat. Notify me once you've done this and merge after.

@Jeropbrenda, I've fixed this

@Zaycodes You may merge