Topic on Talk:Reading/Web/Advanced mobile contributions/Flow

Typo Edit for “Advanced Mobile Contributions”

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Ribbitribit (talkcontribs)

Note: I’ve inserted numbers within brackets for ease of finding problematic copy I’m addressing. They should not be included in edit.

Someone may want to correct the following sentences, on https://m.mediawiki.org/wiki/Reading/Web/Advanced_mobile_contributions

under Project Summary > Advanced Mode

“....Advanced mode adds navigational elements and menus [1]which that allow easy access to talk pages, history pages, [2]Page information, and various other page tools, user tools, and special pages. [3] Additionally special pages...”

Suggested edited version: “Advanced mode adds navigational elements and menus, allowing easy access to talk pages, history pages, Page information, and various other page tools, user tools, and special pages. Additionally, special pages...”

Changes: 1. Make active via use of “allowing” vs “which” or “that”. Or, at a minimum, use either “which” or “that”, not both. 2. Should “Page” be capitalized here? It isn’t in multiple uses throughout sentence. Yet it is consistent with actual “Page info” links throughout site. 3. Add comma following “Additionally”; standard grammar.

AHollender (WMF) (talkcontribs)

@Ribbitribit thanks for your suggestions here. Would you like to make the edit yourself or would you prefer if I did it?

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