Submitted some critics related a couple of wikimedia pages

My project is not related to software development, rather it is related to document management, organization and document writing. Consequently, my micro task is related to finding some critics related to a couple of wikimedia pages. Following is the task given by mentor:


 * Usually we send new Labs users to one of these two pages: Main page or Getting Started
 * I'd like you to skim through those two pages, imagining yourself in two different use cases: 1)  Random helpful volunteer who just shows up out of nowhere wondering 'what is this and what is this good for'?  2)  Specific user on a mission who shows up with a particular project in mind (e.g. an edit-bot that they want to write.)
 * Then, make me a couple of lists of your thoughts about those two pages -- in particular, list questions or frustrations that immediately spring to mind which the docs don't address in a useful fashion. If you have specific ideas about improvements that's great, but just a list of criticisms is fine for a first pass.
 * Then, make me a couple of lists of your thoughts about those two pages -- in particular, list questions or frustrations that immediately spring to mind which the docs don't address in a useful fashion. If you have specific ideas about improvements that's great, but just a list of criticisms is fine for a first pass.
 * Then, make me a couple of lists of your thoughts about those two pages -- in particular, list questions or frustrations that immediately spring to mind which the docs don't address in a useful fashion. If you have specific ideas about improvements that's great, but just a list of criticisms is fine for a first pass.

The required criticism, that abruptly comes in mind (after a bird's eye view):

Case 1: Random volunteer
a) Main Page
 * There should already be a link saying something like 'random user Info' vs 'serious user info' so that each type of user only gets its own required info
 * There should be some FAQ (frequently asked questions)

b) Getting Started Page
 * Not well structured from random user point of view.
 * Couldn't get info that I want to volunteer but what are the projects that I can contribute?

Case 2: Specific user
a) Main Page b) Getting Started Page
 * No idea what this page has to do with editing for bot, how I should start? Its mentioned in 'Labs' that people can do bot work but no further links provided.
 * Its a pile of names, without enough interconnecting what do these names mean?
 * No info given if the Shell Access would be granted immediately, or how many days/hours a user might need to wait.
 * No information that 'Getting project Instance' means you will get a VM, and no further illustration about what a VM is? is mentioned. For non-computer science people, this could be frustrating.
 * What are the compulsory steps? what are 'if required' steps?
 * No FAQ link, which should be there in any kind of tutorial.
 * For non computer science users, what is a 'git'

Other that critics and suggestions, there are free/open source project tracking tools or documentation tools could be available, where progress/status could be monitored. But details could be seen only after analyzing concrete requirements.