User talk:Vldandrew

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Hey Andrew,

I've finally had time to properly read your essay. Congratulations, it's great!

Below are a few comments and questions that could help you improve your essay:


 * What is your OS? This would provide interesting context regarding the installation :)
 * It seems that this was the first time you installed a web server; is that the case? Did you have any experience at all with PHP, MySQL or a installing a web server before? If you didn't, then what you accomplished is a really good job!
 * You mention several documentation pages you read on the wiki, some where you saw instructions, or warnings, or requirements, or the "Hello world" tutorial. Do you think you could add links to those pages in your text? It would make it interesting for people who read your essay, since they could check out the page directly, instead of wondering what page it might be :) To add links, you can add them directly inside your text, or you can use the syntax with double square brackets if you feel adventurous :)

You still have one day to improve on your essay (I can add another day if you'd like). Just so you know, I'm very satisfied with your work and I'll pass your task regardless, but I think the essay would be even better if you could add a few details about the things I asked in my feedback above.

Thanks! guillom 15:45, 25 November 2013 (UTC)